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November 30, 2012
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another part to Kiara and Kaa. If you have a problem with it say it to me don't post it on Tumblr. (FUCK YA LION KING FANDOM)
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Critique by BombPrincess Nov 30, 2012, 7:48:11 AM
I'm going to start off by saying that you should consider asking for Paint Tool Sai for Christmas, or whatever holiday (available as a download online). MS Paint isn't going to get you as far as you would like to be in terms of shading and lineart.
You definitely have an interesting concept here, and both characters are easy to identify.
Most of your problems are in your anatomy and in your shading (or lackthereof). They don't look very 3-dimensional, but with a bit of good shading with high-constrast colors, you could easily fix that!
As for the anatomy, let's assume for a moment that Kaa has nothing in his mouth. His neck would not be thick enough to support the weight of his massive head! Making his body just a little bit thicker would make a world of difference. I would say the same for the coils that he has wrapped around her; make them bigger and stronger looking!
In regards to Kiara, her shoulder looks a little wonky, and she looks a little chunky. I think that if you better defined her neck and her forearm, she would look more realistic.
All in all, this piece needs a little bit of work, but I think you have a great vision as to what you want to create :D I would like to see you try this piece again after a little practice.
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emportant Mar 7, 2013  Student General Artist
You should put "Ideogecolly sensitive material" or what it's named on this O:>
ChuckyBB Mar 7, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
yes I should
Everyone eats me. >.<
ChuckyBB Nov 30, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
don't worry kiara. after this project i will do a nice one of you ok
thank you, ♥
And nothing bad, and I will be happy ?
ChuckyBB Nov 30, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
nothing bad and you will be happy yes. :)
Veemon-Digimon Dec 1, 2012
Kiara happy to be in a stomach ! lol
ChuckyBB Dec 1, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
probably not but thats life isn't it. the food chain.
I can be happy to be in the stomachs, If I wake up, After fainted of a choking. And still under the influence of hypnosis, I'm happy and think it's great to be in the stomach.

But the joy would not be natural.

And yes in the great cycle of life, anyone can be transformed into food, And will transformed into shit.
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