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dragon foxby *ChuckyBB

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this is tobey as a dragon fox

Critique by ~sorrowXwolf Dec 28, 2012, 5:18:48 AM

This is very well drawn, and completely original. The work may look slightly sloppy but hey, its not that bad! This work is truly art and is wonderful... I love the background a lot...

Anyways, its good already but you could improve this by making a more sharp outline, adding texture ad cleaning it up a bit... Maybe a little more shading...

Basically overall the only thing really problematic about this drawing is those uncolored spots...

Well umm... all that's left. this is truly a great drawing though it might need some work... but really, is a drawing ever finished?

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Critique by ~Typhloser Nov 7, 2012, 1:03:12 PM

First off, I do not use stars for rating so I just slap them on because I have to.

Artwise, the first thing I'd like to point out is the subject. You say it's a fox, but doesn't look much like a fox. Its anatomy looks a lot like The Lion King's lions. The only thing that looks like a fox on this is the head, and even then it doesn't have a very fox-like look to it. Over all, if you didn't say so otherwise, I doubt many people would think this is a fox at a first glance.

The lines are wobbly and uneven, and due to your claims of being a professional animator, I don't think this represents your supposed true talents/skill.

The colouring is extremely sloppy, and there's several places where you've left out colour completely on the subject. Parts of his paws aren't coloured, and parts of the wing are obviously not coloured in. I doubt a professional would let mistakes that noticeable be plain in sight.

I have no idea what Tobey is trying to climb up on, but it looks very slick and not even remotely close to rocks.

All in all, this is far from a professional's work. You claim to be a professional animator, but when you have this to show for it, it's impossible to believe such claims.